The graph below show the amount spend by teenagers on the fast food in britain . The units are amount spends is pounds per week in the first figure income group grams per week in the secound figer.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e graph reveals the fast food in britain . It is clear hamburgers . Fish chips and...
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Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...food in britain . It is clear hamburgers . Fish chips and pizza . The years 1970 a...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... clear hamburgers . Fish chips and pizza . The years 1970 and 1985 . It is collabo...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...hips and pizza . The years 1970 and 1985 . It is collaborate pound per week and gr...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'collaborated'.
Suggestion: collaborated
...pizza . The years 1970 and 1985 . It is collaborate pound per week and gram per week. ...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orate pound per week and gram per week. It can be seen that high income it is in...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...me it is increased and 50 per week pound . However in fish chips it decreased fini...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...it is increased and 50 per week pound . However in fish chips it decreased finished tha...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ecreased finished that 30 per week pound . Whereever pizza it is well down in and ...
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... and per week pound. Secondly is 1970 in .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, secondly, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 5.0 33.7804878049 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 326.0 965.302439024 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 75.0 196.424390244 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34666666667 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.94283095638 3.73543355544 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17182762141 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 44.0 106.607317073 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 86.4 283.868780488 30% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 8.0 22.4926829268 36% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.2821800929 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 36.2222222222 112.824112599 32% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.33333333333 22.9334400587 36% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354926523247 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127479418342 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130241518723 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299189535708 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246921360698 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.2 13.2329268293 24% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 97.2 61.2550243902 159% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 1.7 10.3012195122 17% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.88 11.4140731707 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 40.7170731707 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 11.4329268293 31% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.9970731707 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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