Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you
support them or not.
Whether dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping and scuba diving is beneficial for people or not has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of extreme sports through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate the advantages and disadvantages of extreme sports and then will come to an appropriate conclusion.
The most prominent reason is that people do suffer from lots of stress and tensions in daily lives. Moreover, when somebody is engage in these types of sports then they forget about all the stress and just focus on the sport activity which they are going to do. For instance, the person needs a lot of courage to do bungee jumping as it is supported only with one rope. Furthermore, these types of activities can make people physically and mentally stronger.
On the other hand, extreme sports have some drawbacks as well. For example, if the rope of bungee jumping come out or break then person can have extreme injury or even die. In addition, these activities are quiet expensive. Furthermore, ski diving equipments are also expensive and if a person buy cheaper one then he/she might get injured.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts of extreme sports. I would like to conclude that extreme can be beneficial for humans but these sports should be done under better guidance and guide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'engaged'.
Suggestion: engaged
...daily lives. Moreover, when somebody is engage in these types of sports then they forg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95323741007 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63317460661 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2125659088 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201485856797 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696450762206 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787973925009 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117156298816 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520946116052 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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