PEOPLE SHOULD BE ALLOWED TO CONTINUE TO WORK FOR AS LONG AS THEY WANT TO, AND NOT BE FORCED TO RETIRE AT A PARTICULAR AGE SUCH AS 60 OR 65.
DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
Many people work a lot during the entire lifetime. Therefore, it seems fair that this people should decide when they want retiring or not.
The decision to know the time of retiring certainly is not easy, I believe that we should keep active while we can be productive and healthy because there are some examples of persons that stop working and become sad or sick as a reason they don’t have more objectives in life.
On the other hand, If the person feels tired and want to stop working it also can be wonderful because she can be retiring and start a new life cycle phase as have more free time for having a hobby, spending more time with her family, practicing exercises, travelling, learning something new or dedicating on volunteer work.
But, thinking on economic side, some people don’t want to retire at specific age because their purchase power will reduce significantly. In other words, the amount of the retirement is not enough for live and pay all the expenses.
Still thinking on economy, but on governments view, retiring at a particular age such as 60 or 65 must be better because some man and woman don’t have a necessary contribution time and frequently, this people need helps from government for live and pay the costs of living.
Then, to conclude, I strongly agree that the people have a free will for reach a decision when they are prepared to retire since they have financial condition for live by themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ssary contribution time and frequently, this people need helps from government for l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80478087649 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58418057385 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.0733453374 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.75 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30763018772 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131908971356 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444221211754 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155621635557 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339647692756 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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