Why go to university?
Nowadays attending college or university has become prevalent. There are many reasons for attending college, but those most significant for them people decide to go to college are following reasons.
First of all, people have necessitated to getting more and more knowledge and skill. In the contemporary world, if you have not high-level proficiency or have not advanced knowledge in a special realm or even are not be a skillful person, you will have difficulty to live conveniently. On the other hand, one that wants to be up to date, use modern technology, and live more convenient must have knowledge and be a specialist. Therefore, having an academic degree can help people to know more about their health and financial problems.
The other important reason is obtaining money. Although having proficient in a particular field higher knowledge of people, but many people attending college and getting certified degree to hire at a job and earn money. Weather you live in rural regions of a city or live in a luxury house in downtown you must have money. Without money, no one can succeed in their life or career. So having better financial conditions has become a substantial reason for attend at college.
As the other factor, being respectful is reason for some people for going and getting an academic certificate. One way to get a good prestige in society is to be an academic person and have a high knowledge in a special science. In the words of one of my best professors, “if you want to have a high prestige in society, you must have much money or have a high-level position in science.” Thus, being an academic person augment position in the community.
To conclude. If one want to be up to date, or have a good life, and have a good prestige in society, they must attend college or university and get a valid degree.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...edge in a special realm or even are not be a skillful person, you will have diffic...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'high knowledge'.
Suggestion: high knowledge
...ty is to be an academic person and have a high knowledge in a special science. In the words of o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81446540881 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78587424141 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477987421384 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0529534793 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0499989746718 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224917381596 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412789789758 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463605048798 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513355148515 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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