Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Encouragement makes a person do things which he might not even imagine of doing. Such encouragment can be from friends, family, teachers or from anybody. Young people encouranged for long term, realistic goals can do wonders if they put their mind into those goals at such a age.
Young people are often unaware of their true potential. If they realise what a gem they can be, they might really become one. In our life, if there is a period when we get influenced most by the opinions of other people then it is the young age. Analyze the difference between short living fame and long lasting legacy, is hard for such inexperienced minds.
People encouraged at young age often find what interests them quicker and become better at that quickly. Their is a young grandmaster of age 15 in India. He just loves playing chess and wants to become better at it. Everyone has a interest, a hobby. If encouraged that interest can become a life long realistic goal for that person which indeed make his life happy.
However there is a downside to identifying interest early and getting fame at a young age. The basic reason being people are not taught how to handle such success,fame and how to stay humble. We see a lot of pro-athelets who can become legends in their respective games, but they fade away after early fame of one or two years.
Young people must be encouraged to achieve what they aspire. They must taught their goal is journey not destination. They can always achieve more that what they have currently accomplished. Cristiano Ronaldo, a famous footballer achieved tremendous fame at a young age of 19, when he signed for one of the best clubs Manchester United. He still worked hard and won best player award 5 times and still working hard.He is a perfect example of person staying grounded and still working hard to achieve more and more. An inspired mind can achieve unthinkable goals.
- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to add 50
- Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men 26
- Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for t 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...son which indeed make his life happy. However there is a downside to identifying inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74397590361 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50726191626 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545180722892 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7227771046 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95238095238 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166723008138 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546188177743 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488688923001 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10675343007 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409132590697 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.