You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college.In the letter,
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living arrangements. My roommate’s behaviour is intolerable making it very difficult for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation favourably.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. The problem started a month ago when my current roommate moved in with me. Prior to that, I was very happy about sharing the room with my previous roommate. My current roommate talks on the phone throughout the time and plays very loud music at night. Because of all this, I am unable to sleep properly and therefore, cannot concentrate on my studies.
Would you kindly transfer me to another room? I would prefer to stay alone in a room, as my final examinations begin in two weeks, and I have to compensate for the loss of studies of last month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Harman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.775 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82787464361 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3631949286 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6666666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214835042822 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809584924119 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642788878988 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137872384039 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529013010941 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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