You and your friend are planning a picnic in the country side. Write:
• Which arrangements you have already done?
• Other activities that can be done
• How can your friend help with the arrangements?
Dear Manmohan,
How are you doing? I’m very excited and looking forward to our next picnic in country side of the western Pune.
As a part of planning, I’ve sorted out several things already, hope you don’t mind. First thing first, accommodation is off the list, It is a camping area on the bank of beautiful river called kabini, which should be a perfect place to enjoy natural heritage that this site has to offer. For food, the nearest hotel is 10 km far, so either we have to carry ingredients with us and have barbeque on the camp or we can drive back to hotel for meals. I’m fine either way so it’s up to you really.
There are several water sports available at the location, such as river rafting, which are at quite affordable price and I’m very keen to try it. In addition, a gigantic mountain is located at the bank of the river. Would you be interested in night track?
There is not much left to do, except for enquiry at spots center. Would my mind calling at the center and check if we need to bring our own equipment or they supply it? My car is broke down yesterday; can we take your car on the trip? I hope it’s not too much to ask.
See you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandip
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'barbequed'.
Suggestion: barbequed
...e to carry ingredients with us and have barbeque on the camp or we can drive back to hot...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, so, as to, except for, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48672566372 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29926764125 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66814159292 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8913351442 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150113366926 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500704171819 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455382827678 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876380314658 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039558714799 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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