Is experiential learning {learning by doing} a better approach compared to formal education? Do you agree or disagree?
Many methods are accomplished today for education like there is a method of experiential learning and formal education learning. Many students do their education by experiential methods which get successful and In my opinion experiential learning is much better then formal learning. I should discuss both sides with logical conclusion.
To commence there is no ambiguity to say that, experiential is that method which student do their learning by doing get remembered very easily. Many schools and colleges are focusing on this method. Student never forget by doing learning in practical way because practical work sharps the minds which get increase in education.
On the other hand side some school and collages think that study by tutor in formal education is better then experiential learning because tutor is teach every detail in single line from which student can achieve it easily. Education is most important thing if a person want successful in their life.
In conclusion I would like to say that every student has their own mind set it is all depends on student that on which method he wants to use but in my opinion I like to use experiential learning because doing by learning is much better.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70547592856 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0457407927 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.444444444 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338020627901 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150075994894 0.0925447433944 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110393908271 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225881392897 0.151781067708 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580336002445 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 55.0591133005 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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