A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.
say where you went,
where you stayed,
what you can do there and
what the food was like.
Dear Johna,
I am fine and hope you are doing well. I visited Jakarata during summer vacation where you can enjoy nature in its natural form. I wish you must plan to visit there.
Travelling to new places is always fun . But knowing about it before you go there is wisdom and it meas about your stay. Hotel Mominaaz is one of the best ranked hotels that provide you accommodation with chances to do lot of other activities of your taste at affordable price.
Second thing that you will enjoy there is the variety of street food there. Dishes are still rich in taste as were on their earlier time. You will love it.
All in one, visiting there will truly be worth of you your money. I am sending you details . Still you need something to know than let me know.
Say hello to uncle and auntie. Love you.
Your lovingly Rosh
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- A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.say where you went,where you stayed,what you can do there andwhat t 61
- You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.In your letter explain:Why you are writing to himWhy you cannot pay the rentWhen you will pay the rent.Write at least 150 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Johna, I am fine and hope you are doing well. I...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u can enjoy nature in its natural form. I wish you must plan to visit there. T...
^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... Travelling to new places is always fun . But knowing about it before you go ther...
^^
Line 8, column 84, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'detail'
Suggestion: detail
...rth of you your money. I am sending you details . Still you need something to know than...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...you your money. I am sending you details . Still you need something to know than l...
^^
Line 8, column 94, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
... your money. I am sending you details . Still you need something to know than let me ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45098039216 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06687365394 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712418300654 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0086409383 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 48.6428571429 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.9285714286 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386744091307 0.216113520407 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139364077021 0.0766984524023 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754699251554 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218758393917 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477702200773 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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