Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the past few decades the economy has been booming. This leads to the expansion of public transport system in a lot of countries. Although there are some people who believe that funding should be spent on railways rather than roads, I believe that this should be considered in particular circumstances.
On the one hand, since population is growing much faster, subsequently people crave for more private transportation, which calls for excellent Road systems. The more extensive it is, the more convenience it brings for people in regions around the world. In some cases, road system is the only choice for people because the area is situated in the mountainous area or on a steep plateau. Moreover, the cost of freeway construction will cost less when compared to that of railways.
However, it is also a good idea if the government can expand the railroads. First of all, since many people share the use of the railroad, the expense of commuting is reduced to a so much lower price. As a matter of fact, people give up their own vehicle to travel to work or to school every day so the air pollution or traffic jam will be avoided at a better rate. Also, the cost of the logistics will be reduced and therefore leads to an increase in overall economy.
To conclude, I don't think that the government should either allocate more budgets on railways than roads or vice versa. It should be based on considerable measurements before the government spend the money on each type of means of transportation that they prefer for each region.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in particular, as a matter of fact, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7786259542 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70380989736 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8405936615 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3076923077 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13295753497 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417139077931 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446443207212 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854239822774 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508455125239 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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