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The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table presents mean of expenditure, per month, per family, of general Australian household in 1991 and 2001. The information illustrates in term of Australian dollar. Along the decade, some spending pattern behaviors still remained, but some of it changed significantly.
According to stable behaviors, there were no considerable changed of amount paying for food and housing. It is 155 and 95 dollars in 1991, and went up gradually only 5 dollars per each category after ten years past. Furthermore, the number of money spent on non essential goods and services in 2001 also not shifted obviously from 1991. Even though 20 dollars rose up, but it is to say that this proportional was less than one-tenth of total number in 1991 (250).
However, three of expend numbers climbed up or climbed down. For electricity and water, Australian families lose their fund on it average 75 dollars per family in 1991, before climbed up almost doubled to 120 in 2001. By contrast, the cost of transporting and clothing were dropped from 30 and 70 dollars to 20 and 45 dollars, respectively.
In overview, average of Australian domestic spending numbers for purchasing materials and services in two periods were almost equal, the number increased just slightly with 675 in 1991 and 715 in the latter year.
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but some of it changed significantly.
but some of them changed significantly.
Sentence: Even though 20 dollars rose up, but it is to say that this proportional was less than one-tenth of total number in 1991 250.
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Sentence: For electricity and water, Australian families lose their fund on it average 75 dollars per family in 1991, before climbed up almost doubled to 120 in 2001.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 215 200
No. of Characters: 1049 1000
No. of Different Words: 135 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.829 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.879 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.706 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.545 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.089 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.37 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.607 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4