The best way to reduce crime among young people is to teach parents good parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples.
Crime is a one phenomenon and no one knows that when it started. I'm agree with that, the parent should learn better parenting skills to care their younger generation. This essay will explain what are skills parent should learn and develop and also how they apply on their owns.
Actually, there are many reasons why parent should learn parental skills. But from the fact that the nowadays kids should handle very differently. Because of that elders must study kids behaviors and try to find solutions for those issues. Normally, kids do petty crimes, as example, younger may steal money from home. If parents ignore these kind of small faults they will become big criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...gree with that, the parent should learn better parenting skills to care their younger ...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple, younger may steal money from home. If parents ignore these kind of small faul...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...teal money from home. If parents ignore these kind of small faults they will become big cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 568.0 1615.20841683 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 114.0 315.596192385 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98245614035 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.26757987692 4.20363070211 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14623866623 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 176.041082164 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.771929824561 0.561755894193 137% => OK
syllable_count: 163.8 506.74238477 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.9561860111 49.4020404114 30% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173128004137 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708540564305 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655142334502 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134764012343 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324403269402 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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