In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
It is true that nowadays, people tend to work hard in education and in the company. In my perspective, I believe working hard is really necessary for people life, however this case has some drawbacks and I will prove it in this essay.
There are some important reasons that people have to work harder than others. The first reason for this case is that people will achieve their job more successful. For instance, when you have your assignment which given by your tutor and you have to finish it in one week .Hence, in this situation if you try to consult the reference on the internet and concentrate on this project, you are completely get the high score. Another reason is that people will get the high position in their career. Clearly, When you try your best and complete your work but others do not, so the extra pay on your wage at the end of the month absolutely higher than others. Moreover, working hard is also a kind of activity that gain more opportunities for yourself.
Some people claim that working hard has many disadvantages. Personally, I believe it affect to people’s health. What I mean by this is that when you take a lot of work and it is exceeding your health allow, you will be very stressful and desperated. And this will lead a very awful consequence. Another drawback for this statement is that you will not have your time for family or your friends. Obviously, the time which you spend in the company compare to the time you spend to your family and friends is little. This problem will make you lost your interaction with the community.
In conclusion, there are some clear reason for working harder can make your life change but I still notice some drawbacks of this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63278688525 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48219891939 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5669695033 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271095943634 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133061690395 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148736939768 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217274073012 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709813722182 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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