Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Teaching children on how to become a good members of society is a controversial debate nowadays. While some believe that parents are the right sources of teaching this but others maintain that school is an appropriate place to learn being a good member of society. This essay will discuss both the view points with the persistent aspects and examples.
On one side, there are myriad of reasons on how parents play vital role in children behaviour in society. One of the most pertinent reason is parents are the first teacher of children and they adapt the behaviour from home first. Needless to say, the way parents treat their elders and youngers children grasp the same behaviour. Secondly, not only children learn the moral values from their parents but also the habits and manners.
In addition to, school are the pillars of students education and their behaviour which they get from other students and teachers, Moreover, the activities in which children involves in schools like group drama or dance build the team work spirit in them.Furthermore, sharing things with others, helping each other are the key points in society that makes them a good member and which is not the result from school ob=nly but also from parents.
In a nutshell, though parents play trivial role but schools are equally responsible in making the children a perfect member of society.
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01310043668 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47665633185 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550218340611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.968315786 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.555555556 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315587372031 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139288946837 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901206223519 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197897140513 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133118175755 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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