Your friend visited you in your country and stayed in a hotel that you have recommended. Write a letter to the hotel manager about your friend's unsatisfactory stay. In you letter :
1) Tell about your friend.
2) Describe the problem.
3) Suggest some improvement.
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing in regards to the lack of amenities and languished stay of my friend in your hotel. On 7th october, I had one of my friend from britain to visit me whom i recommended your hotel for stay.
First of all, he was very upset by procrastination by staff for his orders. He informed me that before the check-in, he was amid by the staff. However, afterwards, blue collar employees keep meddling him for services like cuisine etc at high prices. He couldn't find apparent reason for such high rates of food as he know-how the area very well.
I want you to take needy action against the staff which will be a laudable initiative at your end. Firstly, please teach a lesson to those who demand for such prices. It wasn't cut for people who in past love to stay on your hotel.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Your's truly,
Vinod Chauhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...my friend in your hotel. On 7th october, I had one of my friend from britain to v...
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...my friend from britain to visit me whom i recommended your hotel for stay. Fir...
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...ces like cuisine etc at high prices. He couldnt find apparent reason for such high rate...
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...to those who demand for such prices. It wasnt cut for people who in past love to stay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50609756098 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42234387552 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676829268293 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8170162896 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.1818181818 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242670774629 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946172196939 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987907890317 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1466292933 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126245111222 0.0580467560999 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.