You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel.
Dear John,
I an writing with context to my stay at your hotel 'Lilo' last weekend. When I came back, I recalled I left my bag in the hotel room.
I stayed in room number 102, 5th floor, on the 1st and 2nd of September 2018. The bag which I left is a medium-sized one, brown in color with two side pockets and a big zip on the front. It contains some items such as my family pictures, few of my accessories and most importantly my cupboard keys.
I would be really obliged if you could send it to my residential address through courier. You can furnish all my details from the reception computer software as entry was done when I checked in your respective hotel. Moreover, let me know if any further information is required from my end.
Looking forward to receive my bag at the earliest. Thanking you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Nick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Dear John, I an writing with context to my stay at your...
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Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
Dear John, I an writing with context to my stay at your...
^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: brown
...bag which I left is a medium-sized one, brown in color with two side pockets and a big zip on ...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...equired from my end. Looking forward to receive my bag at the earliest. Thanking you in...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50967741935 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56783919414 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703225806452 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1643506781 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5454545455 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2326151647 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906642454217 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777805947488 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16151625947 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798886048274 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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