" A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college
Education plays an important role in shaping the future of students. it helps not only for survival but different qualities which are important to live in a society can also be achieved with the help of education.
I agree with the authors statement that, A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculam until they enter colege.
first of all, students between age 6-14 are too young to decide that what are they going to opt or study in future. if they are presented a diverse curriculum in schools they will be able to find their liking and can pursue masters or can research more in that related field after admitted at college.
furthermore it is important for students to learn all the subjects atleast at basic level. it is very important to know our history and to have information about of geographical areas or what crops grow in our country. also maths and science will help them to improve their analytical and thinking skills which will definitely help them in future.
Also based upon subjects taught in schools, students can know their interest in an particular fields and they can explore more of it in college. for example a student if intrested in math can opt for engineering or even a research in mathematics field. students who loved history can pursue their carrier in history or they can study ancient history of differnt cultures in order to know more about them.
If we put a different curriculum it can create problems in future. for example if there is a exam for entering in a college and different states have different syallbus and different level of difficulty it will become very difficult to conduct a common test for all students.
in addition to that apart from education other qualities which are essential to live in a society can be taught in school like humanity. In contrast if curriculum is different like for example related to specific field then, number of hours students spend in school will be reduced they will be able to do some productive things related to their interest in this additional time. also nation's resources can be saved,which can be effeciently used in other areas.
in the end, same curriculum in schools gives you opportuinity to explore different areas and choose one of your interest, also having basic knowledge of everything will definitily help us to grow in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, apart from, for example, in addition, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83783783784 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60517118721 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481572481572 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6421151197 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.823529412 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225074967309 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792917408649 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134273901175 0.0758088955206 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13161603274 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179286594809 0.0667264976115 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.