Some people say that it is good to have a uniform for all the employees at work. Do you agree or disagree?
Extensive research has been conducted to increase the productivity of employee out of which, one such concept is uniform which means standard clothing at workplace; where there is no differentiation among hierarchy. Despite this, it is condemn that uniforms is not a good way because it deter employee performance and it is not practical. This essay will discuss why uniform is not a good idea in workplace.
Firstly, work is a place where an employee spend more than half his quality time to perform his job so clothing must be according to his comfort level so he can produce as per expectation. According to a survey regarding office decorum and clothing conducted by HR solutions, USA in 2017 concludes that an employee performance is directly related to clothing he wear during office hours. Thus, it is clear that employee having choice of dressing at work bring best results and keeping him restricted will refrain his performance.
Secondly, uniform is not practical approach. Office decorum mentions that clothes must be clean and tidy. It is impractical that an employee who spend almost ten hours at job upon his return wash it for next day. In addition, even it is not economical to keep 5-6 uniforms; as not every employee is earning enough to spend on maintaining it. A recent research concludes that an average employee salary in Pakistan allows him to buy clothes after every 9 months because most of his expenditure is utilised in fulfilling his basic necessity which left him with little saving for wish list like clothes, shoes and other accessories. The argument that uniform is a good idea can be debunked.
To conclude, uniform are restricted with formal clothing and is neither feasible nor practical in every profession. In my opinion, in order to produce quality work, an employee must be given fair chance to to dress as per his comfort but do maintain office decorum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'condemned'.
Suggestion: condemned
...on among hierarchy. Despite this, it is condemn that uniforms is not a good way because...
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Message: Did you mean 'deters'?
Suggestion: deters
...t uniforms is not a good way because it deter employee performance and it is not prac...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wears'.
Suggestion: wears
...ance is directly related to clothing he wear during office hours. Thus, it is clear ...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: Recent research
...ning enough to spend on maintaining it. A recent research concludes that an average employee sala...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
..., an employee must be given fair chance to to dress as per his comfort but do maintai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97492163009 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75116547467 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7841481864 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188097460412 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731099137775 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407680332043 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120237373223 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238813272174 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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