TPO-21 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Comparison of Importance between studies hard in school versus the communication skills; this is a hard debated topic for years. I personally agree with the statement that communication skill is far more important than study books. I am going to give the variety of points to bolster my theory.
First of all, study subjects only give you the knowledge, but by studying one can actually do not know how to use the knowledge. In order to utilities the knowledge, need the experience. For example, Communication needed in an office so that juniors and seniors can shear their knowledge. A newcomer in an office has the specific knowledge but do not know where to utilize it, where a senior person can know what is wrong in a job by merely looking at it. So, to gain the experience the newcomer must communicate with his senior. That way he can learn more and reproof his fault.
For success in the job, one needs to communicate with others. Because only by communicating with fellow workers I can gain the specific experience for the specific job. For example, while I was working for a company, there is a problem with the design while constructing a bridge. No one knows the fault because there was a communication gap between engineers and labors. If engineers talk to the workers before, then there will be no confusion. So, in order to understand each other better, you have to communicate.
Communication skill is also important in management jobs. A manager must properly communicate with his workers so he knows any kind of inconvenience they face, and that also helps to bolster the relationship between higher and lower order workers. Moreover, when a student represents a company or present a seminar to the customers, he has to be articulate about his idea must have fluently organized his thoughts and present the main idea. For example, Steve jobs, Imagine if Steve jobs did not have that unique style of presentation skill or due to poor communication skill he stopped in the middle of his presentation, what happened to the Apple products? Communication helps to sell the products. So, a sells manager also needs the communication skill of marketing his product. Another example, in a car showroom, a salesperson can sell a car by enticing a customer on his communication skill.
Other fields of jobs, like a teaching job, a good teacher communicates with his students in order to keep them motivated in the class. Others job also need communication skills, because communication skills not only help in the professional aspect but we can influence others by our communication, while studies only can help to grow knowledge on a specific subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 708, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sells'' or 'sell's'?
Suggestion: sells'; sell's
...ation helps to sell the products. So, a sells manager also needs the communication sk...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for example, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94888888889 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96756207877 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493333333333 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2458755575 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7916666667 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132755520562 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047501456511 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589961416736 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996709403925 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684714734021 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.