Homeschooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in the modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Homeschooling is an old method in the past that many families especially wealthy one preferred thought their children by a tutor in their house, but now this kind of method is becoming out of favor. In the following paragraphs, I am going to extend my ideas about this subject.
Nowadays, with different signs of progress in education methods, parents prefer to send their children to school and university rather than homeschooling because they believe that schools or educational institutes have an important role in children’s social behaviors.
Thanks to improvements in educational systems, many people with different level of IQ and skills will be able to learn education even by themselves. Therefore, we can see that homeschooling is not common than in the past mainly because people access to different sources for learning.
However, in the past people had to use tutors to thought their children, while today there are different sources such as e-book or online sources for someone who have not enough time or even money to spend it for different classes. The self-study methods and books somehow put on the space of homeschooling and tutorial.
In conclusion, it would be better learn in different ways and styles of study to children using electronic resources, self-study programs. In addition, they can learn how to deal with their problems in the educational part of their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24669603524 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92106694721 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.198882628 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911222459493 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041266209992 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225670980362 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530129963954 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233921640243 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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