Nowadays there is a growing trend of private car ownership. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or environmental problems associated with this?
It is true that, wast majority of people have a car by their own name. While, escalating vehicle ownership makes a detrimental effect on environment though, the substantial benefits often surpass the drawbacks to some extent. In fact, enforcement of traffic and vehicle control law would be mitigate the downside to the core.
To begin with, it is often good for a people to have one own car for their private usages. Apparently, in the elder parents, single women, and working couples could able to use own car for their personal purpose without fear of strangers. Such as, in the late night or emergency trip like medical, for the long distance travel time which is more beneficial to depend others if peoples have a car in home. Secondly, public transport services might be limited or they have a fixed time schedule to pass, over crowds of public vehicle may difficult for some to manage. Owing to the fact that, private car would be helpful for the easiness, polluted free journey for employees, geriatric passengers and females in safe situations.
Nevertheless, excessive private vehicles on the road would make traffic congestion, not to be out done, environmental hazards like air pollution, deficiency of natural resources. However, traffic constitutions would inhibit the reckless use of transports just to be drive without any purpose. Similarly, increasing problems in the atmosphere occurred not only by the private car but also other big vehicles and factors too. For instance, carbon dioxide emission from the large vehicles like public bus and lorry would have highest amount of pollution than private four wheeler vehicles. Moreover some impacts like robbery, spread of communicable diseases and pollution's has more common in people seem to be the traveler of public transport.
On the balance, even though there could have a deleterious effect on personal car membership, the positive side would be overcome the negative impacts on environment by the proper legislation of rules and regulations.
- Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should, therefore, be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money.What is your opinion on this? 73
- Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Many people prefer to spend money and not to save it? what are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development? 67
- it is inevitable that as technology advances traditional cultures will be lost it seem that we cannot have these things together to what extend do you agree or disagree this statement 48
- Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
...ehicles like public bus and lorry would have highest amount of pollution than private four w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ion than private four wheeler vehicles. Moreover some impacts like robbery, spread of c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 614, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ler vehicles. Moreover some impacts like robbery, spread of communicable diseases...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for instance, in fact, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22769230769 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76582012191 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3443026281 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987883661675 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385665824553 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361582399888 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564263927174 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208687802658 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.