One day the world's oil and gas reserves will run out. The search for alternative energy sources like wind power, solar power, burning waste, and water power are causing as much environmental damage as the oil and nuclear power sources they are intended to replace.
How far do you agree with this latter statement?
What possible benefits do the alternative energy sources bring?
It is foreseeable that our sources of fossil fuel are limited and the necessary of finding an alternative energy is a must for human being. While I agree that these new kind of energy are damaging our planet with various issues, I believe that we still have some long term benefits to exploit from them.
It is undeniable that alternative energy has not found the successful formula as they intended to replace the oil. Firstly, to consider about wind power there were many wind turbines abandoned along the coast in Viet Nam which cost the government billions of dollar to construct and operation. Yet it depended too much on the wind leading to long stoppage time when the weather was not in a good stage. Secondly, it was witnessed that burning waste for generating power was not always effective in every country. Sweden or Swiss were extremely successful in this kind of energy; however, it was only true in some country as if they could solve the air emitted completely to not pollute the environment.
Others, myself included, are of the opinion that the alternative power still plays a significant role in the future. Since the limited of fossil fuels, people must work out the sufficient and suitable source of energy as soon as possible, or it could be worse when the world run out of gas and oil. There are thousands of our trial have failed, however, this is a normal thing in experiments of find a key to the future. Besides, some experiments and research show that there are potential features in alternative energy, such as tidal power plant applied in the coast of Britain showing impressive results.
In conclusion, although alternative energy resulted in much damage to our planet, there are still reasons to have faith in their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 704, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84768211921 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55669454324 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.9381102633 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277544408343 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887542147351 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520731669491 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140899659241 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582748941758 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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