You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1.say why she/he would not enjoy going to college.
2.explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
3.suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Minh,
Sorry mate for late response due to a super busy week. I hope this replied letter answers properly your consideration for continuing the academic path or trying to get a job. I sincerely would advise you to seek an employment.
Having understood each other for years, I frankly believe you will not be energetic in academic and theoretical knowledge next 4 years in college. In addition, the tuition could be your financial burden during the years of studying.
My friend, you are very talented at game coding. I witnessed you spent whole weekend create a fantastic online game for a competition. Thus, you should pursue your passion and use the skills to end up in a coveted job.
Finally, I suggest you apply for job in one of prominent technology companies. They have wonderful training program to elevate your career path. Then, you could significantly contribute to their success and development with your skills.
If you need further discussion, don’t hesitate to contact me. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Son
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, frankly, if, look, so, then, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11931818182 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76427899788 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.732954545455 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2619772965 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3571428571 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5714285714 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260817431655 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776854077739 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556166852989 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130909915001 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512670446402 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.