You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Hello Mark,
First of all, my hearty congratulations for the humungous achievement of completing the degree and making us all feel proud of you.
In response, to your suggestion on whether to take up studies or job again, I prefer that you settle up with a job. After struggling for a tremendous period of time in earning your master's degree I feel that again doing research would be so boring for you and also again you have to live away from your family, which I feel would be tough for you and your family.
Pursuing a doctorate is too expensive for you to afford after having a family that relies only on your income. Additionally, you can have savings that would help you to achieve your long term goal of buying a luxurious apartment in the center of the city.
With a Master's in Software Engineering I recommend that you can move into the field of Information Technology for the role of a software engineer. Perhaps, if you are still interested in teaching as you were in childhood, you can try out careers in that field as well.
Having said the above points, I consider that you will give a thought before deciding. Convey my regards to your family.
Your friend
Alen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... job. After struggling for a tremendous period of time in earning your masters degree I feel t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, well, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64622641509 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5779197364 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589622641509 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1510425095 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203921555048 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871290334232 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423524855875 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997500421676 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486517714854 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.