The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

It is observed from linear graph about the information of moderate carbon dioxide emissions per person by four countries between 1967 and 2007. The data is calibrated in metric tonnes.

It is crystal clear that in United Kingdom per person emitted 11 metric tonnes was higher than Portugal, Italy and Sweden which was 1,4.5 and 8.5 metric tonnes of carbon dioxide in 1967. In 1977, Carbon dioxide emission reached at peak of 10.5 metric tonnes in Sweden and all countries showed upward trend. Furthermore, United Kingdom,Sweden,Italy and Portugal had showed 4,7 and 10 metric tonnes per person respectively.

During 2007, carbon dioxide emissions was falling in United Kingdom but Italy and Portugal showed upward trend with 5 and 7 metric tonnes. Moreover, Sweden's carbon dioxide emission declined and reached to 5 metric tonnes.

Overall, it is evident that carbon dioxide emission fell in three nations instead of Italy.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31756756757 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65294570076 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3141546567 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366515928878 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179425663317 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958966584513 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228151267137 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722600091093 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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