Being a celebrity – such as famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity bring smore benefits or more problems?
There is no doubt that popularity is desired by almost every one of us. While on the one hand, there innumerous advantages of being popular, on the other hand, the fame carries various demerits as well. In the ensuing writing, I would discuss that the merits of being a celebrity outweigh the demerits.
A celebrity is a someone who becomes known for his/her extraordinary achievements which makes him/her prominent in the society. Even though the identity of oneself becomes widely known and people feel the pride to have this famous person among themselves, but this fate comes at the expense of losing personal space. For example, the most of the famous movie stars or singers cannot roam around free as they were used to. As a result, all these public figures have hired the services of private security guards to ensure their safety as fans become overwhelmed by seeing them and disparately want to take snaps with them.
All of us have a different choice when it comes to a favourite personality, some get excited by seeing an actor while others like to attach their feelings with sports stars. But being a celebrity, the biggest edge is that you are known across the globe and they can influence their followers towards a specific cause. They get huge respect, protocol, and acceptability because of their work whereas a mere presence of an iconic figure can bring a smile to many faces. Above all, they get acknowledged for their work and get huge monetary rewards. Furthermore, they become a fashion symbol and their habits become trends among their followers who want to imitate their idols.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the rewards of being widely known are not restricted to the financial benefits only but also the social benefits. And this comes at the price of losing their privacy because they have become a public property.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'someone'?
Suggestion: a; someone
...tweigh the demerits. A celebrity is a someone who becomes known for his/her extraordi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, while, for example, no doubt, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87658227848 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4782401035 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6870166568 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124831391098 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043553133768 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426271164438 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772892672694 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251894631374 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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