The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon
The illustration demonstrates the life cycle of the large fish that is called salmon.
Overall, there are 3 stages of salmon's growth. Moreover, the living place for every stage is different as well.
It is important to know that salmon eggs are spread among small stones. These stones are placed down the reeds in the upper river with slow moving approximately from 5 to 6 months. At the next step fries, that has grown from eggs, go to the lower river with fast flowing. What is more, the size of such kind is from 3 to 8 cantemiters. After fries came to the lower river, they stay there for roughly 4 years.
The next and the last stage, smolts with a size between 12 and 15 cantemiters are gone to the open sea. There, fish stays for almost 5 years or more, rising to an adult salmon. This type has approzimate sizes 70-76 cantemiters. Salmons are then gone to the upper river for giving the breed what allows to maintain the life cycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 302, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maintaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: maintaining
... river for giving the breed what allows to maintain the life cycle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, then, well, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45664739884 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30630767615 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647398843931 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.5313138888 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.25 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167359879283 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718049555046 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138591281872 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168509036795 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199303994403 0.0819641961636 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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