Now-a-days more and more people prefer to buy fashionable clothes. Does this have positive or negative effect. Give reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world the success in fashion industry is unprecedented as many people apt for the most contemporary wardrobe. It has preponderant facets on society whether positive or negative.
On one hand, it has become the need of the hour to keep yourself peer in each and every aspect. So, people like to adapt the latest trends in clothing as in this way, they feel themselves acclimated to the ambiance around them. In addition to this, various attires are in Vogue at a time so it has become a facile approach for most of the people to choose their clothes from a wide range and variety and remain rakish. Moreover, this ever growing fashion industry is also a source to establish economy of a country. For example, according to the recent surveys in UK there is an increase in the exports and trendy clothes contribute a bulk role in it.
On the other hand, wearing stylish robes can sometimes make u look not only ostentatious but gaudy also. Blindly following modern adaptations can have conspicious impacts on your personality. Furthermore, many indigenous can not afford daundy outfits and this causes enlarging of class difference between the solvent and the pauper. For example, studies reveal that major visible incompatibilities among people of the same society create a sense of discrepancies among them.
To recapitulate, wearing foping dresses is not bad but there is a requirement to keep equipoise in it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding ambiance'?
Suggestion: the surrounding ambiance
...way, they feel themselves acclimated to the ambiance around them. In addition to this, various attires a...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... u look not only ostentatious but gaudy also. Blindly following modern adaptations c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00836820084 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8556109857 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635983263598 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2752120519 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994063772954 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335865584027 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272029018467 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511489473424 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304773864548 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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