Some people think that an advertisement on TV is useless and others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Opinions differ as to whether television advertising has little impact on viewers or it does catch their attention. I believe TV commercials are absolutely futile.
It is understandable why people say that advertising on TV would raise viewers’ brand awareness. One reason is that, along with the Internet, television shows attract a great number of population which means it is a potential environment to promote a product nationwide. Since there are many viewers watching at one time, companies believe that their commercials could capture more attention and thus, seal more customers and increase their sales.
However, pushing more advertisements on television not only seems to be useless but also has an adverse effect on product sales. One reason to support my standpoint on this matter is that, nowadays, people only care about the content that they are watching. Viewers tend to not pay any attention to any adverts that pop up in the middle of their favorite TV series or entertainment game show. In Vietnam, for example, if there is any break time for advertisements on television, individuals will turn to another channel or just have a small talk with others. A commercial, therefore, cannot accomplish its job. Moreover, surveys show that more and more people abominate advertisements for interrupting their relaxing time. Being continuously irritated, customers memorize the brand name to avoid buying, which is a common method of viewers to retaliate companies that abuse adverts.
In conclusion, I assert that any advertising on television in this day and age will not benefit the sales of products. If people want to purchase any merchandise, they will do so without the annoying advertisements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether television advertising has little impac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32967032967 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08233433121 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6536161415 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1216333772 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448401088052 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040056715285 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773081012266 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246159449093 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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