Nowadays, some universities offer graduate students skills that assist them to find employment but some people believe that the main function of university should be to access knowledge for its sake. What's your opinion??
As university education is the final stage before students start a career, many people strongly assert that the only function of academic education is the preparation's employment for graduates. Others, however, think that they should concentrate on training their majors in depth with being made to ignore studies by extra-outdoor activities in universities. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, pratical experience is one of the major elements companies need. First and foremost, universities have tendency to send their students to factories, hospitals or supermarkets to train before graduation. After all, they both get practical experience, even ideas about their work and understand the working conditions. Fortunately, after being a trainee, if you have a good performance, you can have chances of being directly recruited into that company.
On the other hand, intellectual comprehension is first thing we have to study. Undeniably, students must be deeply knowledgeable about their majors, so they are able to put it into practice. Furthermore, it is beyond doubt that most of jobs require effectiveness, so, apparently, big companies would prefer employ a person well equipped with all necessary knowledge related to several positions.
Personally, conceptual knowledge as well as vocational skills are actually important for its own aim.
In conclusion, if all universities are providing their students with knowledge and skills which are absolutely crucial for their employment, there are more talented students attending academic schools to better our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'preparations'' or 'preparation's'?
Suggestion: preparations'; preparation's
...y function of academic education is the preparations employment for graduates. Others, howev...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the jobs') or simply say ''most jobs''.
Suggestion: most of the jobs; most jobs
...e. Furthermore, it is beyond doubt that most of jobs require effectiveness, so, apparently, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, after all, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67355371901 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09276748393 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669421487603 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7050260828 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176228275896 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566831170688 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532546128916 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101753463288 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339209070988 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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