Nowadays, some universities offer graduate students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of university should be to access knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?
In modern society, people who have graduated from universities are usually offered to help them to seek a job by applying their skills. In contrast, some people think that the main purpose of those universities' actions is for their sake instead of students' knowledge.In my opinion, I prefer the first belief.
On the one hand, education plays an integral role in everyone's life. Because there is a switch from a manufacturing economy to a knowledge economy, the world values expertise and skills that individuals obtain. To be more precise, I believe that both soft and hard skills are prominent to any students to seek for any jobs at the moment because they need to apply those for their coming jobs. Current employers have a propensity to recruit candidates that can do various jobs within a single position, so graduate students need to gain knowledge to possess a collection of skills. Taking the Apple multinational chain for an example, recruiters tend to impress on any candidates who have a solid foundation to become all-rounded individuals when they are one of the employees to dedicate to Apple.
On the other hand, earning more money is one of the purposes in the education business. Therefore, they usually find a solution to boost their finances in numerous ways, and applying more skills for graduate students is one of those. Besides that, I consider that this does bring sake to not only the universities but also the graduate students, because it is challenging for anyone to look for educational institutions to teach those skills. According to the survey of the Amsterdam University in Holland, they found that the students in this school want to be taught skills instead of normal theories.
Overall, I believe that the universities still care about their sake but the qualities of graduate students’ output needs to be considered the most important in education. Obviously, there is still an opposite notion but it depends on everyone's view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, still, therefore, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06748466258 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8163652341 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9378278075 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.076923077 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289759726048 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935838987874 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742132885696 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1794191185 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655779488576 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.