You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
• Explain why you are selling the television
• Describe the television
• Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear James,
I hope you are doing well. I’m so excited to let you know that I got a new job in Ahmedabad, and I’ll be relocating there by the end of this month. Unfortunately, I can’t take my electronic equipment including TV as the new house has all of them! So I thought to ask you if you might be interested in buying my TV at a cheaper rate.
It’s a Sony 32-inch LED TV 2015 model (model number 32EX-23489). It has two USB ports and one HDMI port so you can connect your laptop as well as a removable device to watch a movie or listen to music.
I’ll be leaving by the 30th of this month, so if you want to see it, you can come next week on 21st or 22nd. Let me know if you can’t make it so that I can find other buyers.
Waiting for your response.
All the best,
Parth
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-17 | Nourhanm | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-11 | jessicalolarga | 73 | view |
| 2018-10-19 | Parth Chandarana | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: model
.... It's a Sony 32-inch LED TV 2015 model model number 32EX-23489. It has two USB ports...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12025316456 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46326154249 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651898734177 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2909400622 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225363325021 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958182009159 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602704889072 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147405303036 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223397405829 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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