Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
-Explain why you are writing
-Describe your circumstances
Ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my area of interest to grasp computer language.
I read through by advertisement regarding computer course that I am very pleased to join this course but the main problem is lack of basic computer basic skills which I am unable to complete it due to financial problem. In this case, I can not enrol this course right now. Even I can not submit the support document regarding certificate which are related to mandatory requirement for this course.
I therefore request you to please consider my situation and make it as a special treatment to join this course. I am pretty much sure that I can manage this course without any trouble. Also, I will make you very proud in order to select me for this course.
Hope to hear from you soon. Awaiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e this course without any trouble. Also, I will make you very proud in order to s...
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Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...course. Hope to hear from you soon. Awaiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70945945946 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51005101529 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2534715105 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152921310829 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628484273948 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449988097857 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103198925643 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248037279999 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.