In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What are the causes and measure to overcome this trend.
Nowadays people's lifestyle has been changed dramatically, especially related to their food habits. Influence of free trade scenario can be seen in the food industry of each country, as more and more international restaurants and fast food chains are being introduced everywhere. Sadly as a result of this changes in people's dining practices, individuals are suffering from health issues like obesity and cardio vascular conditions. There are some other reasons also behind this catastrophic condition.
To begin with, because of busy professional life, majority of the individuals prefer outside food rather than home cooked items. Although these instant eats offer tasty menus, but they are not healthy as traditional cuisines. Fat content and added preservatives results in serious health problems. Furthermore, todays generations especially young bloods are not at all interested in doing any physical exercises, they rather spent their free time on computers and other technological gadgets. Eventually they will end with serious health and fitness issues. Moreover packaged ready to cook items are also playing a major role in affecting individuals physical well being
In order to overcome this trend, individuals need to be educated about their health conditions and encourage them to takes adequate steps to avoid unhealthy foods and rely more on healthy dining's. In addition, each and every person should engage in to any physical recreational activities rather than sitting in idle during their free time, so that way they can improve their overall health and fitness. Apart from this, authorities can also came in to act by implementing proper rules and regulations to protect it's citizens from being affected by harmful cuisines and dining habits.
To recapitulate, the world is changing very rapidly so as the people's life patterns too. So it is up to the each individuals responsibility to choose what is best for their health. This doesn't mean that everyone should avoid outside food but rather they should keep its consumption to a healthy sustainable manner.
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4475308642 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82604666991 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6229634605 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162652351531 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555894624173 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406832953641 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101011907348 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304712870055 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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