Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Government should invest in arts as it will facilitate the availability of arts to all people.Arts is basically a important part of society and it needs to be encouraged at all levels.But investing that much as invested in military is not the right thing to do.As arts and military is way more different from each other,and they both are controlled by government.
Military plays a crucial role for a country and also a vast platform includes in military like air force,navy,defense and all.Military plays a role in protecting civilians of that country by ensuring that border is not breached or any terrorist activity is not in progress.To ensure all this if government funds a one hundred million dollars in helping them with weapons or resources which will help them in making better observations of any attack or calamity that is going to destruct nations entity,that will be a good step from that government.
Though by this,in any case i do not believes that investing is arts is not beneficial or so,as arts also plays a very vital role in the country's economy and also helps in getting tourist attraction in country,but the same amount of money invested in that field is not a wise step.As it will help in making your country a better tourist place but what if that place is attacked by terrorist where arts has its main focus,an amount which is needed for escalating the boundaries of art and making the country rich in its arts is also an important part.
In addition to this,Arts also play a very significant role in reflecting the tradition of a country,and government is responsible for protecting its country's own cultural heritage.In a way,if artist flaunted some masterpiece that owe a revenue of billions for one painting then it will also help in increasing the economy of that country.
In conclusion,Government is responsible for taking any decision regarding both fields and which want what amount of investment,they should invest in arts and flaunt their culture over world but they need to be more concern about the nation as a whole its protection and dignity too.Military can help them in protecting boundaries and art can take their culture beyond the boundaries.Government should consider some factors before and aftermath of any investment they are going to make from country's wealth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00516795866 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10434118808 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49354005168 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 23.0359550562 334% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.6309991215 60.3974514979 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 387.4 118.986275619 326% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.4 23.4991977007 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.21951772744 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294547320281 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181884471304 0.0831039109588 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141834893274 0.0758088955206 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181884471304 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141834893274 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.9 14.1392134831 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.68 48.8420337079 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 12.1743820225 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 11.2143820225 292% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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