Many city centres have traffic problems, causing congestion and pollution. One solution is to build ring roads on the outskirts of the city taking traffic away from the center. while this is helpful someway it also causes new problems. TO what extent do you agree or disagree.
Urbanization, being the reason for spurt in population, led to congestion and pollution. This unheralded growth left the city centers with infrastucture issues namely traffic. Thought of building infrastucture by laying ring roads would reduce the congestion rate but giving rise to plethora of other problems. This essay will discuss the need of infrastructure development while focusing on the issues associated with it.
To begin with, forging infrastucture by laying ringroads, intra-rail routes, flyovers would definitely see a decline in the traffic congestion. For example, the time taken to travel from sountern end to the northern end of hyderabad city is 30 minutes which would otherwise take 2 hours. While reducing the time taken for travel, this method is increasing the number of vehicles on road without encouraging the public transport, which would apparently reduce the pollution.
On the other hand, focusing on cost of building this sought of infrastucture is significant as the road extention would demand the farmlands which are a living for the farmers. For example, It is noted that 3500 acres of farmland is owned by the government in buliding the roadways around the new capital city -Amaravathi leading to civil unrest.
To conclude, I outright agree with the infrastructure development. However, their is a need to augur well the related problems. In the future , hopefully, governments shall take a prudent decision by not only building the roadways but also presuming the emerging issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00595511952 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7699337748 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219807626835 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734996843064 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428453700266 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123642338495 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501149340938 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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