In Britain when someone gets old they go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after then. sometimes the government has to pay for their care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Well being of the aged is a blessing to the Nation. The question of whom bring responsible for their care cannot be the matter of concern. This essay will discuss the level of responsibility the governement and the family share in honourning them with the care they deserve, as the citizens of state and as a family member respectively.
To begin with, unlike the olden days when the parents deleberately wanted to stay with the children at and above the age of 60, parents want to spend time with the similar age group and nursed with the attentive staff. The significant reason may be the hectic employment schedule and the inability to make time for family. For example, the old men or women seek maximum attention predominently when the senses and the energy are deteriorating. So, it is a viable decision to help them stay in the home with the attentive staff.
Now, to address the payment issue, I believe that it must be the responsibility of the government to take care of the senior citizens by setting a predefined age mark. Governments must consider this as the supporting factor for the freedom of life and welfare of the aged. For example, Indian government deposits an amont of 1000 rupees per month in the form of old age pension.
Despite the helping hand from the government it is the family who can add on to the happiness. For instance, if the person needs more than what is assured by the government then it must be payed by the family for those extra facilities or the treatment.
To conclude, I would outright believe that the basic well being of the senior citizens of the state is the responsibility of the government. However, family must pay for the extra facilities and the expenes incured. In the future, hopefully, the governments shall bring forth new initiatives focusing the aged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76898734177 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74968316189 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7440220745 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282736675699 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888808666069 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493341723757 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150949902903 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348341597357 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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