Nowadays many places of natural beauty such as beaches, lakes and mountains are getting littered with plastic bags, cans, bottles and other garbage. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done in order to prevent it?
Give your opinion including reasons and examples from your own experience.
In today's world, people tend to spend their leisure time by visiting the places of natural beauty. Sometimes, due to unawareness, they litter the various things there which are not eco-friendly and harm the environment. There will be an explanation on the reasons, solutions of this problem. in the following essay, with a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, places like beaches, lakes and mountains are getting exhausted with plastic bags, cans, bottles, and other garbage by the people visiting there. Tourists come across the world at these places and spread such things, because they do not consider it as their responsibility to keep such places clean. Other reason can be unawareness of people about consequences of such activities. For example, people litter various things in water bodies without knowing the bad effects.
To overcome such problems, government and local bodies must participate in awareness campaigns. People must be fined for making the environment and surroundings contaminated. Moreover, tourists must be aware of their responsibilities toward the environment.
In conclusion, I opine that it is the first and foremost duty of the public to keep the places of natural beauty, clean and hygiene. Government should take the required initiatives to prevent such problems.
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47524752475 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9492987142 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.504296692 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0769230769 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223263621874 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694953322831 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636952775962 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117553216191 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794644160531 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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