The table shows the number of foreign visitor to 7 countries.
Summarize the information by selecting the reporting and make comparison where relevant.
The given table compares the total number of foreign travelers (in million) to the seven different countries as a destination. it also provides the number of the British and American visitors to these countries.
As is observed, France is the most popular destination and Australia and Ireland have the lowest attraction for foreign travelers. While, American consist of the most visitors of Canada and Mexico, the British are the most visitors of Ireland.
In total, France is the host of 53 million people from all of the world. Italy and Canada place on the second and third rank of tourist destination with 20 and 15 million visitors. While, Mexico, Thailand, Ireland and Australia have the minimum traveler from the whole world with 7,6,4 and 3 million visitors, respectively.
In detail, the British and American people go to the Australia at the same amount, 0.3 million. While, the British approximately tend to travel to France, American have a small tendency to visit from France with just 0.1 million passengers. In contrast, while, 5.5 million American are visited from Mexico, just 0.1 million of Mexico's visitors are the UK people.
- The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant. 61
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number sports facilities. Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measurements are required.Discuss both these view and give your 73
- The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.Summarize the information by selecting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 61
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it legal requirement.To what extent do you think law are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? 67
- The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbish. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfy they were with their visit during the same two periods.Summarize t 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...he total number of foreign travelers in million to the seven different countries as a d...
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Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...n different countries as a destination. it also provides the number of the British...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e is the host of 53 million people from all of the world. Italy and Canada place on the se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14361702128 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64182909701 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7132120142 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.7 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0852013253712 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449662708106 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058356630345 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075510132135 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827870137522 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.