Wearing fashionable clothes are becoming important today. Is it a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, people find it essential to wear high fashion clothes in their everyday life. In this essay, I will discussing both detrimental and beneficial sides behind this phenomenon.
On the one hand, there exists a couple of beneficial effects in terms of catching up with the latest trend. Firstly, putting on a pricey dress could show your respect and professional attitude to other people, especially when participating on particular occasions such as wedding anniversaries or graduation ceremonies. In addition, it is evident that being well dressed can boost our confidence and self-esteem, which play an evitable role in our career and social communication.
On the other hand, people have to face many harmful risks when seeking for the newest trends. First and foremost, wearing branded costumes is the culprit of wastage as trendy clothing usually costs as an arm and a leg. Therefore, the offspring’s exorbitant demand for wearing like a fashionista can exert an immense pressure on their parents, who day by day are working hard to make both end meets. Furthermore, the obsession with brand name clothes could distract people from their prerequisites. Taking students for example, instead of concentrating on their study, the vast majority of college shopaholics devote so much time to be stuck behind the computer, navigating various online fashionable websites to follow the latest global trends. As a result, they have inclined to fall behind with their studies.
In conclusion, after evaluating both pros and cons, I firmly believe that the negative influences of wearing fashionable clothes outweigh its positive ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34865900383 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94431419331 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674329501916 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7485518495 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148734964274 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532978118336 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788977370763 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110706801719 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942450195265 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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