You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city.
Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.
Dear Manik,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to share an exciting news that I am planning to join a course in your city.
As you know, I have finished my graduation five years back and after that, I have been working as a software engineer in a Multinational Company. Now I am thinking to get a post-graduation in my field of study ‘Information Technology’. I am planning to leave my current job and get a part-time job in Singapore and hope that you will help me to find one. Also, I need your assistant to find a top engineering institute for me though I have searched some universities from the internet I want you to talk with some universities, students and your colleagues to find out more information; i.e. tuition fees, accommodations, part-time working hour etc. about the institute.
Hope you will write me soon with all the information I need.
Best Regards
Abdul.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'exciting news'.
Suggestion: exciting news
...alth. I am writing this letter to share an exciting news that I am planning to join a course in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...job in Singapore and hope that you will help me to find one. Also, I need your assistant to fin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2203059436 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.033201337 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212646416729 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789325119399 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620372296758 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139344736916 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320368294516 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.