Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers play an important role in students' life in modern era due to their daily interactions. Therefore, when it comes to the question whether teachers should make their social or political views to students in classroom or not, people adopt spread spectrum of attitudes depending on their characters and educational backgrounds. On the one hand, there are people who adhere to the beleif that teachers' views may help students to think about their own view about political and social issues; on the other hand, others belive teachers should keep secrete their views from students. As far as I am personally concerned, the latter carries further weight since not only does it aid students to concentrate more on their study but also will the students evaluate their teachers objectively.
The goal of attending school is learning educational material and the role of teachers is passing these materials on to students utilizing their approaches. In fact, some teachers think that they can manage their class and attract students' attention giving them their view regarding timely social and political issues. But uttering such views will disrupt the process of learning leading to poorly educated students. For instacne, when I was at high school, my teacher sometimes took the class time so as to speak about what was happening in our country giving his views, while most of students were reluctant to hear them and he had not taught several lessons. Furthermore, young students are enough old to be able to distinguish that what is their teachers telling is just his views, as a result of which it misleads them. Consequently, teacher should tell their views to students, if they wants to make students well-educated.
Students will be able to evaluate their children depending on the impression they have receieved from their teachers. To make it clear, if teachers utter their views, it may leave some bad or good impression on students' minds, as a result of which they are not able to assess their teachers' ability in unbiased manner. Nowadays, parents send their students to private schools in order to be educated well while teachers who teaches there are not always well-qualified. So president of school need to use students' views about teachers to evaluate teachers' skills and ability. Subsequently, if teachers articulate their views to students, they may influence students' views about their's ability.
All in all, presenting views in the classroom is just wasting of valuable time which can be used to teach students important lessons. Moreover, teachers sometimes give their views in order to attract students' attention and increase their job security. So if I were a teacher, I would never give my views about political and social issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...teractions. Therefore, when it comes to the question whether teachers should make their social or po...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to lead'.
Suggestion: to lead
...ws will disrupt the process of learning leading to poorly educated students. For instac...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...y teacher sometimes took the class time so as to speak about what was happening in our c...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
... in our country giving his views, while most of students were reluctant to hear them and he had ...
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Line 3, column 893, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...d tell their views to students, if they wants to make students well-educated. Stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16258351893 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67037026028 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481069042316 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4163354521 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.777777778 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9444444444 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287755438076 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1236741107 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595805828574 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216379845821 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381675709925 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.