You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Hi Robert,
I’m excited to tell you some fantastic news at professional and personal fronts.
First, I’ve changed my job as I was really bored of working with TCS in web development from last 2 years. There wasn’t anything impressive and alluring anymore to keep me glued to web development because I had already mastered it thoroughly. I wanted to learn something new to attain unique skills, so I decided to move on. I’m now working with IBM, an esteemed software firm. Here, I’m working on computers networking which requires connecting laptops and desktops using wireless technology. I was over the moon when I was given this opportunity, so thought to share with you.
Another exciting news I’ve to share is that I finally persuaded Lisa to marry me, and we are tying the knot next month on 5th January. I want you to be the best man in my marriage, so you need to be there by 3rd.
I’m sure you must also be exhilarated after hearing this news and would immediately start packing. I wish you a happy and safe journey for the trip and look forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes,
Jon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...'ve changed my job as I was really bored of working with TCS in web development fro...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83163265306 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67792023182 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704081632653 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0785051053 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9166666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150704250427 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516570346981 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339166631914 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957261021726 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180797475254 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.