Do you agree or disagree with the following statement : Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problem to the public.
Currently, with the burgeoning advancement of technology, there is an increasing variety of media emerging in society. Based on the expansion of media, some individuals cast doubts on the accuracy of news displayed/presented in these media and they reckon that the erroneous information propagated/disseminated in the platform gives rise to a bunch of social problems. Personally speaking, I concur with this opinion and there are a couple of reasons to account for my view.
To begin with, the newly-emerging media are not qualified by the authority in accordance with any laws related to the qualification of media, thus a bunch of media is run by cynical individuals and some of them even lack in the rudimentary conditions to maintain the well-being of amassing news, who have the propensity to distribute false information or standpoints to misguide the public. Meanwhile, with the influx of the information, multiple traditional media often initiate to deliver news without qualifying its sources, which exacerbates the problem of fake news. The research conducted to evaluate the media’ attitudes toward the fake news demonstrates that some media show no concern for their sources of news. They harbor the idea that they do not need to take on the responsibility of delivering the truth and what matters first is how many citizens may be appealed by their exaggerated news or how much income they can earn. The research absolutely indicates that there is an apparent propensity of media’ preference for money, instead of the responsibility, existing in the domain of media.
What’s more, the ever-rising trend of fake news is likely to exert detrimental effects on the well-being of the whole society. What reflected by the fake news is wholly erroneous and even misguides the citizens into the wrong paths/makes citizens go astray. Worse still, the society suffers from the fake news generated by the media for fear of the information conveyed by the fake news. For instance, a few months ago, a man called the police department in the capital airport and told the officers there that he installed some explosive substance on specific planes. After that, a bunch of media begun to hype this affair. Some of them even stated that the security in the capital airport cannot prevent the terrorists from generating attacks, which gave rise the panic of the citizens living in Beijing and did harm to the airport’s reputation. Consequently, this affair was verified to be fabled. This example suggests that what the media hype results in is the disorder of social sequence.
Admittedly, not all the news transferred on the Internet is fake and some media with the sense of responsibility keep qualifying the reliable sources of news. Nevertheless, the rapid expansion of fake news cannot be ignored due to its adverse effects it imposes on the society.
In a nutshell, the emerging media do pay less attention to their accuracy of news due to the dearth of qualification procedures and the sense of conscious, which possibly results in the panic of the whole society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15308151093 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10631204731 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487077534791 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 825.3 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6100581036 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.421052632 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4736842105 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184747845239 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596375515418 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435699311637 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113060988695 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342638543203 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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