Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many cities. Business are encouraged to move to rural areas. Discuss it's advantages and disadvantages.
It is undisputed that the problems of living and transportation have tremendously raised in the urban areas. So, business tends to shift in the country side which would surely renders benefits to villagers. But, it has some disadvantages too. Here, this essay intends to discuss merits and demerits of this happening.
There are numerous benefits of this phenomena. First and the foremost, increasing number of factories, industries and some hydro power projects uplift the lifestyle of villagers. To demonstrate, people would get many job opportunities, probably raise their living condition by providing supplementary source to their earnings. Besides that, people would be more wised about different skills such as carpeting, making garments and so on. For instance, a recent study found that, in Rukum district of Nepal, 60% people enrolled for different job positions in hydro power station. Consequently, the establishment of industries and factories boon to arise the lifestyle of people. On the contrary, it has thorny sides too.
The movement of business in rural areas create a lot of brutal problems. To be specific, the problems of pollution, damaging of road et. cetera. will be on the top of the table, definitely affects in the health of people. What is more, people who live in the urban cities would travel to rural areas in the search of job and this would certainly increase the population of village. That means village areas would be more crowded than before and tough to find tranquil environment.
To recapitulate, undeniably, this aspect has more advantages than disadvantages. But, personally, I think government should make strict rules regarding the setup of different kinds of factories in the village areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, regarding, so, for instance, i think, such as, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32608695652 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93649976603 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.15228422 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129133061911 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361702583625 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429351870484 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800076664933 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348607043036 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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