the graph below shows average carbon dioxide (co2) emission per person in the united kingdom, sweden,italy and portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The given graph illustrates the amount of Co2 which is produced per individual in four different European countries from 1967 to 2007. As it can be seen, the trend of released carbon dioxide is upward in Italy and Portugal, while in two other collaborators, in the presented survey, the United Kingdom and Sweden, is downward.
In the United Kingdom, the amount of CO2 has increased from about 11 tonnes in 1967 to 9 tonnes in 2007. The CO2 emission in Sweden showed a different pattern, which has risen to slightly more than 10 in the first decade of the survey period, but in next decade has reduced sharply and reached to 7 tonnes in 1987. Then, the figure for CO2 has declined steeply until 2007 when it reached less than 6 tonnes.
On the other hand, in Italy, the CO2 emission increased sharply to more than 6 tonnes in 1977, then boosted gradually till 1977 by around 8 tonnes and after that was stable until 2007.Portugal which has the lowest amount of CO2 emission experienced an upward trend. In fact, it increased from 1.5 tonnes in 1967 to about 5 tonnes in 1997 and then remained stable.
In summary, despite the fact that the amount of CO2 emission in the United Kingdom and Sweden is decreased during the mentioned period but it still is more than Italy and Portugal. Also, it is noteworthy that in 2007 the amount of CO2 emission (after a rapid reduction) is equal to the figure of Portugal (after a low increase)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Portugal
...es and after that was stable until 2007.Portugal which has the lowest amount of CO2 emis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, then, while, in fact, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61328125 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44239979783 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49609375 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2176389781 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.222222222 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316704539963 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135869059818 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550020581118 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206251893209 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613731231348 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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