In many countries smoking is now illegal in public places.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that smoking is now banned in public areas in some nations. This essay totally agrees with this statement because tobacco’s smoke will affect surrounding people and the remaining of that can cause a fire.
Smoking should be completely banned in public areas because it has some bad affection on non-smokers especially someone has asthma problem and children. People with asthma may stop breathing when smoke from tobacco is around them. Besides, children who have very weak lungs would have high chance of getting lung diseases if they breathed in smoking areas. For example, a 4 years old boy Tommy had lung cancer because his family opened a restaurant and people usually smoked there while he was playing around.
Another reason why smoking is now illegal is that leftovers of tobacco can be a reason of a fire. After finish smoking, smokers usually through away the remaining. However, this action is very dangerous since public areas have flammable materials such as grass, paper or tree’s leafs. To illustrate, last year when my friend visited our house, he was smoking in our balcony where we planted some small trees. After he left, we realized that it was a fire from our balcony from his tobacco. Firefighter came to our property and fixed the problem; however, our stuffs were damaged because of that.
In conclusion, smoking can be a reason of someone’s disease and it can also cause a fire which is dangerous and costs a lot of money to solve the problem; therefore, it should not be allowed in public places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: THROUGH_AWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throw'?
Suggestion: throw
.... After finish smoking, smokers usually through away the remaining. However, this actio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93893129771 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53660343219 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2692124017 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153994179551 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584916910692 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547669693746 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103372342158 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335924407982 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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