The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts give information regarding proportion of population in Yemen and Italy based on 3 age groups in 2000, and those population prediction in 2050.
Overall, there will be more population for elderly people and less population for younger group in both Yaman and Italy in 2050.
A more detailed look at the pie charts reveal that a decrease projection for 0-14 years old group in Yemen will be much lower than Italy. While the younger peopulation in Italy will fall from 14,3% to 11,5% (about 3% decrease), the children and adolescence population in Yemen will be droppped by 13%. On the other hand, in 2050, the percentage of elderly people will in Italy extremely grow for about 18%, while there will be just bit more 60 years old population in Yemen.
The contrast prediction for both this countries is in 15-59 group where that group population in Yemen is predicted to increase, Italian people aged 15-59 are projected to decrease. Both the increase in Yaman and the decrease in Italy will be relative big which are 11% and 15% respectively.
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Sentence: On the other hand, in 2050, the percentage of elderly people will in Italy extremely grow for about 18, while there will be just bit more 60 years old population in Yemen.
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Sentence: While the younger peopulation in Italy will fall from 14,3 to 11,5 about 3 decrease, the children and adolescence population in Yemen will be droppped by 13.
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Error: droppped Suggestion: dropped
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