You learnt that there is self-funded vet hospital that cures various illness of animals free of cost. This hospital is struggling to raise funds these days. Write a letter to leading newspaper editor appealing the community for donation.
In your letter
1) Explain the situation
2) Say what actions you would like the newspaper to take
3) Describe negatives to convince the newspaper editor
Dear Raman,
I hope you find this letter to divert your attention towards the charity hospital of animals which is struggling currently because of lack of financial budgets. I want you to publish this article in your daily tabloid.
From last few years, a grant was issued by government to manage the operations of hospital, but because of new government body in town, all the financial assistance has been stopped. Therefore, hospital authorities do not have finances to purchase the food and medicines for animals.
Hence, I would appreciate, if you give space to aforementioned issue in your editorial page so that people would become aware of this and can contribute to this noble cause. In the absence of funds, hospital body has to leave the pets in open and most of them have diseases which can easily infect the humankind by causing different type of viruses. What is more, most of the stray dogs which are kept here if left unattended, they can bite children and youngsters.
I am looking forward to seeing this issue published in your newspaper.
Your faithfully,
Amrinder Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, as to, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02173913043 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68026816366 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1169351761 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156340452183 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638390322129 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505019870304 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092579422535 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620991416384 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.