Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people attitude toward organization brings to the light a question that has provoked a debate several times, namely, whether ability to plan is helpful in modern life or not. In my opinion, who has a very complicated lifestyle, nobody can become successful without efficient planning for his tasks and responsibilities. Some people may think that it is wasting time to write to do list or check the priorities, However, I believe that it is not true.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that we are surrounded by different kinds of duties and we are not able to to them all in one day. It is really essential to arrange our works based on their importance and finish them one by one. For example, I, as a graduate student and newly mother, must do a lot of research and pass final exams, while doing the laundry and washing the dishes or feeding my baby. It is near impossible for me to successfully finish every thing in one day and I am trying to choose the most important one first and then continue to next step. Therefore, without an excellent organization nobody can devote his time to main tasks and achieve his goals.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that, people tend to waste their time and participate in minor activities. For instance, they watch TV, while they have to wrap up their research papers or visit their manager. If individuals do not organize their time and manage the process of doing project, they would postpone it to future when is too late. Hence, it is crucial to draw a map and motivate ourselves to move forward.
Admittedly, sometimes we are not able to stick to plan and unpredictable situations happen on the way. Financial problems, divorce, having new baby or breaking up with a friend make us vulnerable and unable to track the plan. Nevertheless, I assert that if we look at our dreams, it motivate us to forget our problems and start again. A study at Harvard University shows that people who know what they want to do or be in future, solve their problems earlier and move on again.
Due to aforementioned argument explored in previous statements, I strongly recommend people to make a plan to avoid chaos in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ent kinds of duties and we are not able to to them all in one day. It is really essen...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'motivates'?
Suggestion: motivates
...ssert that if we look at our dreams, it motivate us to forget our problems and start aga...
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Line 7, column 420, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ple who know what they want to do or be in future, solve their problems earlier and move ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65151515152 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68465105567 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.905046793 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.352941176 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172438624672 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481938754581 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325732068493 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912562102717 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329056841919 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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